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Beautiful, and so beautifully read in such a soothing way.

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Thank you ☺️

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I love this--always up for a good extended metaphor. Maybe I'd like my body to be the kind of basket I used to have on my bike when I was a girl--white wicker attached to the front handlebars, with plastic pink flowers woven into it. I'd like to make a girl feel the way I felt when I rode that bike with the beautiful basket.

(I also loved being able to see you in the video. It is nice to put a face and voice to your words.)

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Thank you Ritaxx There's definitely a poem to be written about a white wicker basket on a bicycle - the journeys it must have enjoyed!

I do enjoy reading my work - I think I'll do more of it 😊

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It was so nice to see your face on this one ❤️

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Ah thankyou ! I loved reading it 😊

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